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Monday, August 9, 2021
Onomatopoeia Poem
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What a fantastic example of Onomatopoeia Taliyah! I was wondering what you were going to be describing and it got to the toaster and I had a little bit of a laugh because I made a connection and thought that a toaster can be a bit of a noisy thing. Is your toaster quite noisy at home? Wonderful presentation of your poem, well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Wilkinson
DeleteYes my toaster is quite noisy. And i'm happy that my poem made you have a little laugh. I'm also quite happy that you like my poem and made a connection with it. Just in case i'm thinking of the wrong connection, what kind of connection was it?
-Taliyah