Today I did this Colour Poem because the class was supposed to do this on colour day but we didn't get time so we ended up doing it today. So what we did to make this was we had to choose a colour and then write a poem about that colour you choose. So after I made a poem about my colour I published it onto a Google Drawing. My colour was Blue as you can probably tell by my Google Drawing up above. So I hope you like it and remember to feel free to give me some tips in the comments section down below.
Kia ora Taliyah,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your wonderful poem about the colour blue. I thought your choice of images were very powerful and helped me think of lots of things that are blue. Here is a sentence I made up inspired by your poem:
Blue feels like diving into the depths of the ocean and swimming with dolphins and whales.
What do you think? Have I captured the colour blue?
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader
Hi Sharon
DeleteThank you, your sentence that you have made up just by using my DLO ( Digital Learning Object ) is awesome. Yes you have definitely captured the colour blue. I am glad that I helped you think of lots or things that are blue. ( Question ) What do you mean when you say "I thought your choice of images were very powerful" ?
-Taliyah
Kia ora Taliyah,
DeleteI'm so glad you liked my sentence. In answer to your question the 'image' you created was through the words like blueberries or clouds touching blue ... Words create images in our mind. That is the job of a writer. And you are a poetry writer, or I should say ... poet!
I hope that answers your question. What other images does the word blue create for you?
:) Sharon
Hi Sharon
DeleteThank you for clarifying what you said in the sentence, and I am also glad that you are happy that I like your sentence. You have taught me a new thing today ( that we can create images in our mind ). I enjoy making poems, and I think when I am older I might even make some poems up. Since you have said that I am a poet. There are to many images that I can create using the colour blue so unfortunately I can't name them all. And yes you have answered my question!
-Taliyah
Kia ora Taliyah,
DeleteI'm glad I answered your question and that my information helped you learn something new. I'm hoping we see some blue in the sky very soon.
Have a great school day!
Sharon
Hi Sharon
DeleteYes I hope so too.
-Taliyah