Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Sunday, June 13, 2021
Similes
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ReplyDeleteGreetings Taliyah,
ReplyDeleteOur name is Sulia & Acein, We attend Panmure Bridge School in Auckland.
Wow! what a great example of similes. We really enjoyed how you have created a bunch of examples of what a similie is to give the audience or other peers a better understanding. We also enjoyed how all of these similes described you which was fun to read.
Maybe next time, try to add ay Learning Intention to give other bloggers the main intention of this DLO. also try to explain more about how to write a similie in your blurb.
What did you enjoy about this activity?
Keep up the great work!
- Sulia & Acein
Kia ora Taliyah I really Liked how You did your As fast as a cheetah and as slow as a snail great job Have great day. :-)
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