Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, December 29, 2021
Summer learning journey ( Part 2 )
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Kia ora Taliyah!
ReplyDeleteIt is Charlotte here from the SLJ commenting team!
Wow, what an incredible kennings poem you have written! I love the lines ‘Sinister - Stripes’ and ‘Jungle - Prowler’. You have illustrated a tiger’s nature amazingly! Ka pai!
Are tigers your favourite animal? My favourite animal is probably an elephant. That is because they are so graceful and caring, especially towards their own whānau! I think a line for a kennings poem could be ‘protective - stomps’!
Keep up the awesome mahi, Taliyah!
Ngā mihi nui,
Charlotte :)
Kia ora Taliyah!
DeleteTigers are amazing, it is no wonder they are your favourite!
Elephants are so magnificent!
That is fair that some don't fancy you! Give the ones you like a go. remember though, the more you do, the bigger the chances you have of winning prizes!
Ngā mihi nui,
Charlotte :)
Kia ora Taliyah!!
DeleteHmmm, maybe it's nice to admire from afar? I like the idea of tigers and elephants, but I know I'd be scared to see them in person!!
Well, the more activities you do, the bigger chance you have of winning prizes! Did you know that you can win all sorts of things completing activities for SLJ?? And that is different activities by the way!
Keep it up!
Ngā mihi nui,
Charlotte :)
Hi Taliyah!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Finau and I'm a year 8 student at Pt England School. Nice Kenning Poem! I love all the different animal kenning you have though of. They sound very fierce and strong (in a good way). What is your favourite animal in the summer? Great work!
Finau