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Monday, May 10, 2021

Who Am I?

 


Today I made this poem so the class had to do this who am I? poem and well we got given this poem which was written by a 10 year old boy



And then we had to write it by on our self but a little bit different then this so first everyone had to start with the first paragraph which said Who am I? some would say I am erik I have blue eyes I am long-sighted like my father and have blonde hair-short and good for swimming but what you not know about me is that... and then we all had to write the last paragraph at the end of our poem which said so who am I, you might ask? I have blue eyes I am long-sighted like my father and have blonde hair-short and good for swimming I am erik. So that is my example of my Who Am I? poem and I hope you like it and remember that if you like this you might even want to make one of these yourself and if you have a blog I would love you to put it on your blog and give me your blog link in the comments if you wanted me to have a look at your Who Am I? poem and I might even comment on your blog post and even give you tips on what you could do better! And if you do end up making one of these and you would like me to see your Who Am I? poem that you have made and you don't have a blog to put it on so I can see it then you can always take a picture of your Who Am I? poem that you have made and then you can put it in the comments down below so I can still see it because I am always checking for new comments on my blog posts everyday before and after school in the weekdays and in the weekend I check my comments before and after I do something. So I hope you like this and maybe even leave some comments down below.

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