Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Monday, March 1, 2021
Me, Me, Me Poem
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Brilliant poem Taliyah. Your DLO is very eye-catching and the added images are very cute. The words you have selected to describe yourself are perfect. I would have been interested to know what you had to describe on each line. Which line did you find the easiest to write about yourself?
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Taliyah I really like the animals you put on there. there so cute.
ReplyDeleteI have pet a rabbit they are really cute they had babys but we had to give them away :(
how long did it take.