Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Monday, March 1, 2021
Me, Me, Me Poem
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Brilliant poem Taliyah. Your DLO is very eye-catching and the added images are very cute. The words you have selected to describe yourself are perfect. I would have been interested to know what you had to describe on each line. Which line did you find the easiest to write about yourself?
ReplyDeleteProbably the last line about what I like doing
DeleteThanks for your tips I have updated my blog post and said what I had to describe on each line so if you wanted to know then maybe you might have to check on my blog post again and check. What line did you like the most on my blog post. Taliyah
DeleteMalo e lelei Taliyah I really like the animals you put on there. there so cute.
ReplyDeleteI have pet a rabbit they are really cute they had babys but we had to give them away :(
how long did it take.
Ok cool what did your rabbit look like this took about 2 to 3 days.
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