I made a story called Alma for reading and I have been working on it for quite a long time now. So I hope you really like it and don't forget to leave a comment down below of what you think of it.
Part 1 Alma
One day there was a girl called Alma and she went for a walk down the pathway in the snow. The snow was very crunchy and you could hear the crunch whenever Alma stood on the snow. So she went for a walk to this doll shop and on the way to the doll shop there is this big black board that lost kids write their name on whenever they go past or when there is another lost kid. So she was lost for about 2 weeks ago so she wrote her name on the big black board. And when she got to the doll shop she saw this doll that looked exactly like her so she decided to go into the shop. But the door was locked she tried and tried but it just wouldn’t budge so then she decided to roll up a ball of snow then with that same ball of snow she threw it at the door. Then she walked away and suddenly the door opened and she went in and something very strange happened …
The doll that looked exactly like her started moving. She heard this weird noise and you will not believe what it was. It was this little boy riding a bike. The bike was crusaders colours and if you don’t know the crusaders then they are a big group that play rugby and those 2 colours are black, red and maybe white if you wanted there was a little bit of white on the bike. And finally the part that you should be waiting for she walked over to the shelves and on those shelves there were heaps of old dolls that were from the 80’s. Heaps of those dolls from the 80’s were very creepy because they could wink and even move all by themselves.
The end
To be continued …
Part 2 Alma / Lily
Once upon a time there was this girl called Lily and she was a very small girl. She was only 5 years old in 3 days turning 6 she was very excited for her birthday in 3 days. Because she is allowed to invite 14 people over to her birthday party but sadly only 9 could come because …
One of them was sick, the second one had to go to swimming lessons, the third one had to go to ballet lessons, the fourth one had to go to another friend's birthday party and finally the last one had to go to piano lessons. So she was really sad that those people couldn’t come to her birthday party but at least she still had heaps of fun.
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